17A Elevator Ptich No.2

Here's the pitch!


 Reflection
I took the advice to explain more about how I would reach my customers. The positive feedback was surprising. There wasn't any advice that wasn't poignant or silly. I also took the opportunity to show people how the spray works since the effect is really cool. That is why I shifted focus to how the product works and how the business will work.


Comments

  1. The Tavern TimesOctober 21, 2017 at 4:34 PM

    Awesome pitch! I really like how you incorporated a lot of your feedback in your 2nd pitch. I like the hands on real life demonstration as well as your plan on how you plan on reaching your potential customers. The only critique I would have is to maybe make your pitch a bit more scripted with a little more natural flow. I like how your pitch was natural and semi off the cuff, but I think a little bit more organized structure to the pitch would enhance it. your first pitch was a bit more polished, so I think by taking the content of this pitch and pairing it with the clear delivery of the first one and you have a perfect pitch! As always, your energy and passion is apparent and that makes me very interested in pursuing a business deal as a potential investor or customer.

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  2. UnknownOctober 22, 2017 at 2:20 PM

    Emily,
    I loved how you demonstrated how your product worked with the paper towel demonstration. I feel like this really added to your pitch and ensured that the customers truly understood how this product would work and that it would be a beneficial product. Your pitch seemed very well prepared and it was obvious that you were passionate about the service you are offering and knew exactly what you were talking about.

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  3. Lory CastilloOctober 22, 2017 at 11:44 PM

    Hey Emily! Your elevator pitch was very well thought out and I could tell you prepared for it. It made your pitch even better. You explained the product well so consumers will be more inclined to buy it. As a consumer, you want your salesperson to be knowledgeable about their product.

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