22A-Elevator Pitch No.3


Conclusion: The majority of the comments were positive and encouraging. A comment that really helped me was how my first pitch was more polish, the second was more effective at explaining my product, and how the third elevator pitch should be a combination of the two. 
Based on that feedback, I added the polished script from the first pitch, the demonstration and marketing strategy from the second, and combined them to create the third. Because of the combination in improved presentation and delivery of important information, it is better than the last two attempts. 

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  1. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 11:05 AM

    Emily,
    Your final elevator pitch is great!! It is obvious to see that you were very prepared for the pitch and knew exactly what you were going to say. Your passion and excitement is evident. Again, I really enjoyed how you incorporated the water repellant on the paper towel as I feel like that is a great selling point within your elevator pitch. Your tone and attitude were perfect throughout your presentation and I can tell that you were really comfortable in this pitch as well. Great job!

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  2. The Tavern TimesNovember 12, 2017 at 4:11 PM

    Hey Emily! Awesome pitch! You certainly did combine the quality of content of the second with the polish of the first. I also really enjoyed that you did another demonstration of the water repellent spray! Maybe next time later down the road you will be able to do a demonstration with a shoe and show your service in action by comparing a shoe that has been serviced with just a plain old shoe. Overall great job!

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